English, asked by lonkarritika, 11 months ago

editing, English. The Earth is one of the eight
(a)planet that go around the Sun. In ancient
(b)times, the people who study the stars
(c)noticed that while certain heaven bodies
(d)seemed fixed in a sky, others seemed
to move around.​

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Answered by sawakkincsem
1

English is a universal language. One should know its grammar properly to convey an individual's message successfully. The given passage is edited as such.

Explanation:

  • The Earth is one of the eight planets that go around the Sun. In ancient times, the people who studied the stars noticed that while certain heaven bodies seemed fixed in the sky, others seemed to move around.​

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Answered by vilnius
1

The Earth is one of the eight  

planets that go around the Sun. In ancient  

times, the people who studied the stars

noticed that while certain heavenly bodies  

seemed fixed in the sky, others seemed

to move around.​

Explanation:

  • 'Planets' will be in plural form because 'eight' of them have been considered.
  • The past tense 'studied' will be used because the sentence speaks of the action done in the past.
  • 'Heavenly' will be the correct form of the word to be used.
  • The definite article 'the' will be used to denote 'sky'.

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