Question

Editing. Error
Kite flying bring people together -
But is a good hobby.
Traditional Indian kites is made
Of paper or bamboo.
European kites using parachute
Material to made them
Inflatable. This makes it
Costliest but also more reliable.

Answer 1

I have given here the whole passage with all error corrections. Corrections are marked with #.
Kite flying #brings people together -
But is a good hobby.
Traditional Indian kites #are made
Of paper or bamboo.
European kites #use parachute
Material to #make them
Inflatable. This makes it
Costlier but also more reliable.

Answer 2

The edited passage is as follows:

Explanation:

The edition of the passage is as follows:

• Kite flying bring people together

• But is a good hobby.

    - AND

• Traditional Indian kites is made

    - ARE

• Of paper or bamboo.

    - FROM

• European kites using parachute

    - USE

• Material to made them

    - MAKE

• Inflatable. This makes it

    - AND

• Costliest but also more reliable.