Question

EDITING ERROR


Spending time for their kids brings(a)

immediate as well as long-last(b)

gain for a parents. According to a(c)

research, children with concerned(d)

parents are more efficient.
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Answer 1

(a)  Spending time with their kids brings

(b)  immediate as well as long-lasting

(c)  gain to the parents. According to a

(d)  research, children of concerned

parents are more efficient.

Explanation:

• With is a preposition. A preposition is a word  to link pronouns/nouns, words/phrases to other words within the sentence. They connect people, objects, time and locations of a sentence. Prepositions are short words, and  are  placed  in front of nouns. "with" as a preposition which means in the company/presence of somebody/something; having/carrying something;using something; in connection with; in the case of
• "Long-lasting means enduring/having endured for a long period of time. In this case we use "long-lasting".  That is we must use "present continuous which shows that an on-going action is happening now, and that the action is going to happen in the near future. Since "spending time with kids" is something is continuous and must always happen in the future, we use the present continuous tense which is long-lasting  (that is, continue existing/ happening for particular time).
• We use "to"as an infinitive here. The to-infinitive is used in several sentence constructions, which expresses the purpose of something/ someone's "opinion about something" (in the above sentence it refers to the opinion that "spending time.................bring long lasting gain to parents).
• We use "the" instead of "a" as parents are plural and we use "the" in certain specific plural noun. We say specific plural noun, since we use "the" before noun singular/plural only if it refers to a specific noun.
• We use "of" instead of "with". "Of" as preposition indicates relating to/belonging to, or reference, used to specify the number or an amount. hence here we use"of" since it means here "belonging to" (children of concerned parents, which means children belonging to concerned parents)

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Answer 2

Answer:

Grammer Editing

Explanation:

In the above given question, we are given a sentence where we need to edit a sentence and create a sensible sentence.

EDITING ERROR

Spending time for their kids brings(a)

immediate as well as long-last(b)

gain for a parents. According to a(c)

research, children with concerned(d)

parents are more efficient.

Edited Sentence :

According to a research , children with concerned parents are more efficient.

Spending time for their kids brings

Immediate as well as long-last

gain for a parents.