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Spending time for their kids brings(a)

immediate as well as long-last(b)

gain for a parents. According to a(c)

research, children with concerned(d)

parents are more efficient.

Answer 1

Spending time with their kids brings immediate as well as long-lasting gain for parents. According to research, children with concerned parents are more efficient.

Explanation:

• "with" is added instead of "for" in the given sentence as both words have different meanings and "with" is more suitable than for.

• These words are the prepositions that are used to connect the sentence to make it complete.

• "long-lasting" will be used instead of "long-last", as long-lasting shows the continuity effect.

Answer 2

a) Spending time with their kids brings b) immediate as well as long lasting/long-term c) gain to the parents. According to a research , d) children of the concerned parents are more efficient

Explanation:

Error correction is the activity of correcting different types of errors in text such as punctuation, spelling, word choice, and grammatical errors

1. Instead of the preposition "for" we must use the preposition "with" which indicates "being together or being involved"
2. Instead of "long last" we must say long-lasting" which implies occurring over/ relating to a long period of time. We either say "last long" or "long lasting"; we do not use "long-last". Alternately we can use the word "long-term" too in this sentence
3. We use preposition "to" here which indicates  "relationship" (as in here refers to "parents")
4. We use article"the" has been used as the noun "concerned parents" refers  to specific type of parents, and as such we use the definite article "the" which is used to indicate a specific noun

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