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Children hardly gets time to
read story books. In the few time
they get after finish the homework.
what all they wants to do
is watch the cartoons or plays
video games these days. The another
is that there is greatly pressure
upon them to perform or excel.
The situation is no best among college
Students.

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Answer 1

Children hardly get time to

read story books. In the less time

they get after finishing the homework.

what all they want to do

is watch the cartoons and play

video games these days. The problem

is that there is great pressure

upon them to perform and excel.

The situation is no good among college

Students.

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Answer 2

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Children hardly get time to

read the story books. In the few time

they got after finish the homework.

what all they wants to do

is watch the cartoons or plays

video games these days. The another

is that there is greatly pressure

upon them to perform or excel.

The situation is no good among college

Students.