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It was not the body part you are likely to think much about. But with just a little effort ,
you could prolong the life of your brain
cell.According for Alzheimer's disease International, at least 36 million people has dementia worldwide, a figure that is projected
to increase ofover 115 Million by 2050
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It is not the body part you are likely to think much about.
But with just a little effort, you can prolong the life of your brain cell.
According to Alzheimer's disease International, at least 36 million people have dementia worldwide, a figure that is projected to increase to over 115 Million by 2050.
Explanation:
- The entire passage is stating a fact of the present scenario and predicting the future. Hence the tense used will be present and future.
- In the first sentence, ' It was not the body part you are likely to think much about.' therefore instead of 'was' it will be 'is'.
- In the second sentence,' But with just a little effort , you could prolong the life of your brain cell.', 'could' will be replaced with 'can'.
- The verb 'according' is always followed by the preposition 'to', thus instead of 'for' in the sentence 'According for Alzheimer's disease International' 'to' will be used.
- 36 million people is taken as a plural identity, hence the verb in agreement is 'have' and not 'has'.
- When a specific number is given the preposition following 'increase' is to. So in the sentence 'increase of over 115 Million by 2050' the preposition 'to' will be used in place of 'of'.
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