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The blood one is incorrect
Donating blood is an noble deed because the availability of blood give hope to those people in needs blood in order to survive. It gives them a new lease for life. Hospital needs a reliable supply of safe blood where can be ensured by a broad base to regular,voluntary blood donors
The word noble shouldn't have an in front of it. The give in this sentence is supposed to be gives. Needs is supposed to be need. A lease means a contract, why would you need a contract for life? Needs after Hospital is unnecessary, it should be nerd. Where what can be ensured? Where the blood can be ensured. The comma should be replaced by and.
The glacier one is incorrect
The glacier is a extremely large mass of ice which move very slowly, often down an mountain valley. Since a very large mass are involved in the movement, glaciers has a huge capacity to erodes rocks and transport a rock material. Glacial erosion can creates major landforms.
The word extremely should have an in front of it because it's a vowel. An object moves, not move. A mass is involved because its singular. Glaciers have, because its plural. Erodes should be erode. Creates should be create.
The India one is incorrect
The but in front of grandeur should be correct to and. In the olden days, the land used to be. because Its in the past. Knowing should be known. After that sentence I can not make sense of anything its trying to say, the sentence structure is terrible