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Editing -the greatest benefit of science are that it have prolonged our life expectancy. Next only to this is the various inventions which seem like miracles. Man has send artificial satellits in the space.

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        "The greatest benefit of science is that it has prolonged our life expectancy. Next to this is its various inventions that seem like miracles. Man has sent artificial satellites in space."

Another way of making this smooth in regard to reading is by adding a few words or changing the sentence structure.

        "The greatest benefit of science is that it has prolonged our life expectancy. Next to this are various inventions that seem like miracles. For instance, how man has the ability to send artificial satellites in space."

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