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I should never forget one of my childhood experience. I wastrying to climb a tree when my foot slips and I
fall and fainted.My friends would not see be breathing and thought I had dead. They all ran away and left
me. Meanwhile,I regain consciousness and find that I could not move nothing.I could not get up or cry
for help.I was having a terrible headache and the pain in the back was awful.At last I can see someone
coming,it was my uncle.I have never was so happy to see someone as I was seeing Dear Uncle Mishra.
Answers
→I could never forget one of my childhood experience. I was trying to climb a tree when my foot slipped and I fell and fainted.My friends could not see me breathing and thought that I was dead. They all ran away and left me. Meanwhile,I regained consciousness and found that I could not move anything.I could not get up or cry for help.I was having a terrible headache and the pain in the back was awful.At last I can saw someone coming,it was my uncle.I had never been so happy to see someone as I was seeing Dear Uncle Mishra.
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→ Main mistake was of TENSE.
→ Incidents narrated are written in past tense.
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Explanation:
→I could never forget one of my childhood experience. I was trying to climb a tree when my foot slipped and I fell and fainted.My friends could not see me breathing and thought that I was dead. They all ran away and left me. Meanwhile,I regained consciousness and found that I could not move anything.I could not get up or cry for help.I was having a terrible headache and the pain in the back was awful.At last I can saw someone coming,it was my uncle.I had never been so happy to see someone as I was seeing Dear Uncle Mishra.
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→ Main mistake was of TENSE.
→ Incidents narrated are written in past tense.