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Spending time for their kids brings
Immediate as well as long lasting gain for a parents. According to a
research, children with concerned parents are more efficient ​

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Answered by maryamkincsem
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Spending time with their kids brings immediate as well as long-lasting gain for parents. According to research, children of concerned parents are more efficient.

Explanation:

  • "with" is added instead of "for" in the given sentence as both words have different meanings and "with" is more suitable than for.

  • These words are the prepositions that are used to connect the sentence to make it complete.

  • "long-lasting" will be used instead of "long-last", as long-lasting shows the continuity effect.

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