English, asked by agastyathegreat, 10 months ago

Find 5 mistakes from this paragraph . The best answer would be chosen 'brainliest' .

Topic : My first school trip

It was my first school trip . We were going to Amritsar , the historical city & the capital of Indian state - Punjab . My parents had agreed me to go for such a trip .
Summer vacations had just started . On 1st of June , we were summoned at school from where we would continue our journey . All my friends joined us . It was a scorching day . We departed .

We saw a number of things on our way to Amritsar . The lushful greenery roadside was really enjoying to see in contrast to the pollution at metropolitans . We also visited to the historical city of Sirhind , Punjab . After traveling 6 hours , we were on the border of Amritsar .

The city of Amritsar is named after 'Amrit Sarovar' located there . We booked at the inn .
The next day we started our visit to the city .

We visited the Golden Temple , the Wagah Border & a number of places . The street food in Amritsar was also very delicious to eat .
The city was very beautiful.
The city stood at the confluence of historical and modern India .

After staying there for more than three days . We left the city to reach to our hometown . It was an unforgettable trip . Going to school trip with friends is really wonderful !

Answers

Answered by N4RU1O
1

Answer:

  1. 2nd paragraph Mistake: we saw a Correction. We saw
  2. Your English is preety good there are no mistakes left i could find

Hoped it helped

Answered by aman3813
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Answer:

Had just started - - - > have just started

Us--->me

Had agreed--->have agreed

Enjoying---> enjoyful

.... Only these are mistakes...

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