Find grammatical mistakes ......plz
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I think you should change the following
One day he had an idea that he should join a special school for children with disabilities. He told his parents about his wish. But his parents refused saying that they cannot afford to send him to the school that he wished to join. Gabbar knew about his family situation so he accepted his parents' decision. He thought about the problem and had another idea. He asked his parents to buy him 7th standard textbooks. After his father gave him the books he asked his mother to teach him. So he started studying regularly. Shortly, he joined a government school and with the guidance of his mother and his hardwork and determination, he secured first rank in India by scoring 500 out of 500 marks
Ooh my favourite question is here again!
•... lost one leg in a car accident...
•...had a brilliant mind(spelling of brilliant was wrong)...
•...wanted to attend school(the word "the" needn't be here)...
•...One day ("luckily" is unnecessary and inappropriate)an idea struck his mind. He thought of joining the special school for abnormal or handicapped children...
•...When he told his parents of his idea, they said that they were dissatisfied with it...
•...want to take any risk...
•...Gabbar was their only child...
•...they couldn't afford to send Gabbar to any of the elite schools of Delhi...
•(Gabbar knows all about...to a car accident)- needn't be there as it is inappropriate
•...went to buy his books...
•...gave him his books, Gabbar said to him,"Dad, mom can give me tuitions. I will join the local school when I am better."
•...thus, he started taking tuitions from his mother...
•...Time passed and Gabbar joined a school in their area. Now, he concentrated only on his studies. With all his heart in his studies, he always stood first in his class.
•...his parents were glad of his success. He became famous in his school for his remarkable marks. Time flew by and Gabbar was soon writing his class 10 board exams. His results didn't surprise anyone. He ranked first in the whole country. Gabbar's story teaches us that to do something great, some deep feelings are necessary.
(I might have made some changes that you don't desire, check it out.)
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