Question

Find the editing
Anne is in need of the true friend with
Who she can share her joys and
Sorrows.she has loving parents and about
Thirty people whom she can call friend.
When she is with his friends she
Could talk about matters of everyday
But cannot share her feelings

Answer 1

Answer:

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Answer 2

We are required to do the editing for the paragraph given

• The first sentence can be corrected as ' Anne is in need of a true friend with '
• The second sentence can be corrected as 'Whom she can share her joys and '
• The third sentence can be corrected as 'Sorrows. She has lovely parents and around '
• The fourth sentence can be corrected as 'Thirty people whom she can call friends '
• The fifth sentence can be corrected as  'When she is with her friends she '
• The sixth sentence can be corrected as 'Can talk about matters of everyday '
• The seventh sentence can be corrected as 'But can't share her feelings '