Question

Find the error-will you lend me, little money,to tide over this crisis.No error

Answer 1

Can you lend me little money to tide over this crisis?

Answer 2

The most normal approach to make this inquiry is "Might you be able to loan me some cash?"

You aren't making an inquiry, you are making a demand, in this manner some is the word to be utilized.

Also, when you offer somebody something, you don't utilize any however a few, for instance: "Would you like some cash?"

In the two cases you kind of anticipate that the appropriate response should be certain.