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Good Wins Over Evil Kiara Neal, Grade 4, Ettalong Public School Short Story 2013 Once upon a time there lived a boy named Maxx who lived in a town called Bangson. A big dark secret was lurking in Maxx’s past. A long time ago when Maxx was just born his parents were poor, they couldn’t even afford fresh water. Maxx’s parents had to give him water from a puddle, when he drank from the puddle something mysterious happened. Maxx obtained a new power, this was no ordinary power it was a dangerous power. It was not until some ten years later that Maxx discovered his special power. It came about one day when he was at the beach. A bully named Oscar went up to Maxx and he said “poor boy such a little poor boy”. Maxx became very angry and then he turned into a beast known as a werewolf. Maxx attacked Oscar who cried out in pain from the large scratch on his chest. Upon hearing Oscar’s cries, Maxx ran into the jungle to hide. Some fifteen minutes later, Maxx stumbled upon a cave, in he went. Maxx started to calm down and he transformed from the angry werewolf back to Maxx. Maxx thought to himself “who am I “? He took a deep breath and sighed. “Is this a dream or real life”? The next morning Maxx awoke and found himself in a bed of leaves and grass, he sighed with relief, it must have all been a dream. Maxx stood up and went on to collect berries for his family’s breakfast. Maxx found himself wondering again, “was last night a dream or real life”. Later that day, Maxx met a new friend called Ray. Ray was trustworthy so Maxx told him his secret. “Seriously” Ray exclaimed. Maxx said “just remember don’t tell a soul.” “Alright” Ray replied. The following day when Maxx woke up, he went about his day, starting with collecting some berries and apples, he then went to find his friend Ray. Ray was at home sick in bed, Maxx made his friend some soothing soup. Maxx found it felt good to do something nice for someone else. It was soon dusk so Maxx headed home. On his way home, Oscar was hiding behind a boulder. He threw several stones at Maxx which hit him. Maxx roared with rage and again he started to turn into a werewolf. Maxx launched at Oscar and in one fast move hit him and knocked him unconscious. Once he saw what he had done Maxx was appalled. Maxx sat down next to Oscar and waited until he came around. When Oscar opened his eyes, Maxx said “it isn’t very nice to throw rocks, but it also isn’t nice to punch people.” Oscar agreed “I guess I owe you an apology. Maxx helped Oscar to his feet and the two boys became friends. From that day on, Maxx learnt to control his anger and he never hit anyone ever again.

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