GUYS I NEED YOU TO REVIEW THIS PLZ
June,28
It is a day before my birth day and it is like living in hell I sometime just want the god hades to come down and free us but others I would pray to Apollo to let the light in and warm us but for the most of the days I would wonder what it would be like to be outside the walls of Troy. But lately I would wish that just for my birth day that I could go out there to where everyone had forgot and see all that lay before the great wall of Troy. Today I was walking to the shop and I overheard some talk about the kind and his son the prince they say “ for will the king ever let the prince marry “ and the other replied “I would love to see the young man with the princess of Greece” then they both said “YES IN DEED” but as I started thinking about it I thought that maybe just maybe they will open the walls for this and all of us would be able to see the outside and see what lay beyond the wall of Troy say maybe the gods will be there at the wedding and all of the Noble family’s would go too that would be so fun maybe I could bring my friends along because if the prince of Troy marry the princess of Greece we may just stop fighting and make peace oh how that sounds maybe even the god Zeus and goddess Hera will be there too.
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