Question

Guys, Please correct my poem I beg you guys.

Did you listen about the sun that is always happy?
That sun is always cheerful
It tries to remove sadness from its life
It wants to tell people this message about how happiness is important; Happiness is the smile you make every time
Sadness is the smile that removes your smile
It makes your life from flowers
To a dark room filled with an ocean of tears and depression
Always be cheerful
remove the sadness from your face to darkness to lightness
The sun will smile and everyone around you will smile too
Happiness is like sunshine
Delighting is brightness
Being delighted is the key to life
Because it's everything you want
That sun is always joyful
That sun is always bright and light
It is always going to avoid darkness and sadness
It will always be happy for billions of years
that sun will always be me, I am that Sun!

Answer 1

it's correct.......................