Question

Guys please help Please tell me that this poem is good or not Actually I had tried to write a poem first time ever by myself

Answer 1

Answer:

It is good But if you take time and improve it then it csn be great. You can also add some more paragraphs.

Explanation:

Hope it helps

Answer 2

Answer:

its good your handwriting is nice and i think that plays a good role in poem writing