Question

Guyyss I made this poem my self......I need suggestions and improvements..........please this is for the literary symposium in my school

Answer 1

that's brilliant writing and your calligraphy is awesome

Keep Going Man

Answer 2

It's a very very very beautiful poem if you wrote it yourself.

If you re open for suggestions I would like to give some , because I love literature.

So you should try to more rhyme the words even if you don't ,at least try to rhyme intelligently once or twice.

Secondly, you should try to conclude your poem to some ending. it should not be left hanging out in nowhere.

Yes, that's all.

You should carefully use more intelligent words.

P.s Your handwriting is beautiful! keep going

Cheers!!