Question

having finished college and than.
a shorthand course i was hiring as
secretary on the editor of a
magazine now i had an job and
an apartment in delhi it has a heaven
for a women by a small town

Editing in each line​

Answer 1

The edited passage is below..

Having finished college and then a shorthand course, I was hired as secretary of the editor of a magazine.

Now I have a job and an apartment in Delhi. It is a heaven for a woman from a small town.

Answer 2

The errors are detected in each of the lines of the given passage and the corrected passage is rewritten as follows:

Having finished college and then a shorthand course, I was hired as the secretary of an editor of a magazine.

Now, I have a job and an apartment in Delhi. It is heaven for a women from a small town.