hello every one, i want just somebody to correct my writing. It s letter for the townhall to complain about some negative aspect of my city (300words)
Dear townhall
The residents living in casablanca are extemely unhappy about the lazy attitude of the local town council towards the uncollected rubbish and clogged drains in our area.
In the past few months, the rubbish has not been picked up on the regularly scheduled time resulting in huge garbage. Consequentely, it has attracted not only flies and mosquitoes but also wild dogs which attacked the residents on several occasion as well as oder animals. These stray animals also scatter the rubbish and make the several parts of housing estate dirty and smelly. In addition to that , the residents have to bear the discomfort of the stench from garbage and are concerned about the safety of their family members and the other residents of colony.
Moroever, The drainage system in our locality leaves much to be desired., especially during the rainy season, which causes much inconvenience to the residents. This rainy season our city had copious rainfall. The entire state was flooded. Our city was no exception. You will be shocked to know that even after almost a week of the rainfall, the rainwater has not been drained. The simple reason behind this flooding of the city roads is the faulty drainage system. The stagnated water has been causing serious health issues due to stink and causes also travelling problems that have made the life of the residents litteral hell.
Really it is shocking that the town council authorities have not taken any steps for improving the system so far. Many a time this problem has been brought to the notice of the concerned authorities through the press and other means but nothing has been done. May we hope now that you would immediately look into this matter and take urgent steps to avoid such public nuisance
Hoping for prompt response
Thank you
YOurs faithfully
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(The letter must be addressed to a person, like officer in-charge and not the townh hall)
(from address)
(date)
(to address)
Sir/ Madam,
subject-(subject)
The residents living in casablanca are extremely unhappy about the passive attitude and irregularity shown by the town council towards the collection of rubbish and cleaning of clogged drains in our area.
For the past few months, the rubbish has not been picked up on the scheduled time and this has led to the piling up of garbage. As a result, it has attracted not only flies and mosquitoes but also wild dogs which attacked the residents on several occasions as well as other animals. These stray animals also scatter the rubbish around, making the whole area dirty . In addition to that, the residents have to bear the discomfort of the stench and are concerned about the safety of their family members and the other residents of the colony.
Moroever, The drainage system in our locality leaves much to be desired, especially during the rainy season, which causes much inconvenience to the residents. This rainy season our city had copious rainfall. The entire state was flooded. Our city was no exception. You should know that even after almost a week of the rainfall, the rainwater has yet not completely drained. The simple reason behind this flooding of the city roads is the faulty drainage system. The stagnated water has been causing serious health issues and travelling problems that have made the life of the residents a total mess.
It is incredibly saddening that the town council authorities have not taken any steps for improving the system so far. Many a time this problem has been brought to the notice of the concerned authorities through the press and other means but nothing has ever been done. We hope that you will immediately look into this matter and take the required steps to minimize the nuisance caused by the aforementioned problems.
Thanking you,
Yours faithfully,
(name)
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