Question

Hello friends !
I want to say that I have written a small poem, but i don't know that this poem is good . please read the poem given below and give me marks from 10
others can comment me the marks.

WHY WE ARE NOT LIKE

Our home should become like a beehive,

this is that which we want in our life.

Honey bees become one when their is some arduous,

But we are not one when their is difficulty, which is obvious.



please give me marks out of 10 or other can comment.(*_*);-);-)
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Answer 1

Answer:

I will give you 9/10 ok dear

a very little mistake is there ok