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I can still- quite distinctly- remember the ripe days of my life. 120 years has changed everything but my mind. The days in the sun shading the people who were in the woods each day. My sap leaked. Drip. Drip. The pain was bearable when I thought of the sound eliminating the volume it surrounded itself with.I flashed through all my memories. I thought about all the amazing people I grew up around. The good times and the worst of times, each time so special. The bets friend I've ever had, Thomas. He was a loyal being and was always loving and caring. His family would visit me every year to pick my delicious apples, fresh and sweet. The day he went was the worst of days. Thomas ran after a toy, the innocent little boy. The toy lay in front of me till this day. He ran then the car blitzed over him. Oil leaked and as did his blood. Thomas had left.

AAAAAAAAAAAARGHHHH!!!!!!!!! They think I don’t feel pain. I stare the fire in the raging red it produces. It rages before me and my beautiful autumn leaves of every color. Buring over in a aura of blue, green and orange. They were all gone. The ash burns my roots. I remember the rainbow boys. They would protect us from horrible tree hunters. They saved my mother, but now she was bound to deaths door. The ducks that were shot for no good reason, just for some sort of sick entertainment. melancholy vibes filled the smoke polluted air. I can remember the time of racism, horrible and cruel racism. The time when my country had the most unmerciful leaders making biased rules for their own benefit. Thomas's father was a calm, sensible man, though the people made him lose his dignity. He was just like any other man, even better, just a different race. Why did it matter so much? Why did it decide your life, your race is a beautiful differation, not a burden. He was arrested for petty theft, with no proof nor a witness. He was hanged that day, on my long-grown branches.

Answer 1

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Answer 2

Hey ....

mate .....

This is a good story....

but it is too long ....