Question

Hello.......I'm sachi and I'm writing a book and here's the first page of my book apart from the gramatical errors can you tell me what else can I do with it.....to make it more effective and interesting ........here the page


I'm very excited for tomorrow's camp.Yes! We are going for a 10 day camp! Isnt it exciting? I think it's just a dream because it's impossible to convince my dad..Because he is always firm on his intentions. But now whatever it is, he has agreed So, right now I'm packing stuff and calling my friends to know what all things they are gonna carry with them.Apart from this aspect I have packed all my essentials like toiletries, slippers, shoes , compass and a whistle. Incase If we are in danger, we can give a signal so that our teacher can come for help. I think it's very exciting to get lost in the forest, isn't it?No! It's not getting lost in the forest is not exciting at all don't even dare to think like that or else I'll cancel your trip "my mother said angrily" Mom! Do you really think I would do that? I was just kidding. Fine But don't you dare to do any mischief got it?" said my mom" okaaaaaay."I said in a low voice" ​

Answer 1

hello friend u r doing great and I wish that u right many books like this