Question

hellow friends i m geeta i have to become group leader of school so for that
we have to give 1st introdection among all.student so i had written like this if their is any mistake so please tell me and i m from red colour group

INTRODUCT
hello friends i m geeta rathod from 10 std and i have to become group leader of red group like every year red group is on 1st no so this year also red group will come 1st for that please vote me we will work together and any problem regurding any thing so u can come near me for discussion

please vote me
thanku.

so friends tell me how it is.

Answer 1

this is good bt u can't use it in school.. it is for campaigns for ur friends group.
goodmg/good afternoon respected sir and my dear friends.. myself Geeta Rathod from 10th std and I want to be the leader of this group. as we know this group , every year became first. I assures that I will do every possible steps to make this group 1st. I have so many qualities to be the group leader.