Question

here i wrote a letter
plss check this letter

ques is you are renunciation Sharma,president of janak puri ,new Delhi. the main park in your locality which was once a model Park lies in a state of utter neglect. it has become a favourite spot for Anti Social elements and a permanent resting place for stray animals.write a letter to the municipal commissioner requesting him to instruct the Horticulture department to take prompt action and restore the park to its original condition

plss check this body of letter
and give me suggestions that I will make my letter more better​

Answer 1

Answer:

The letter is alright to go.

Explanation:

The letter is perfectly fine, but you should add full stops to it to make it more readable and proper.