Hey all ...
Finish this story for me ... write between 600-900 words .
And create a sense of mood and place in the story.
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⭕ I have known Stuti ever since she was a fellow participant in the Amazon Pen to Publish Contest 2017 and won a notable mention at the end. I have seen her progress over the past two years—her book became a bestseller, she got nominated for awards and invited to several big events—and it has been nothing short of outstanding. I had been thinking of reading her book for a long time, but I finally got a chance only a few weeks ago.
⭕ The story starts off well as we are introduced to the protagonists, Myra and Kabir, who want to try something new other than their current jobs. I belong to the category of people who don't like to take too many risks and are happy with stable jobs, so perhaps I could not identify myself with the protagonists' desperation to risk everything and start anew, but I'm sure that aspiring entrepreneurs will be able to relate to them.
⭕ However, I was invested in the characters and wanted to know what happens next. From Stuti's Instagram posts, I know she loves traveling and that aspect is reflected in the protagonists' journey through picturesque locations in the quest for a feasible startup idea. I loved the descriptions of the ambiance and the locations; it was poetic and vivid, which shows the class of the author and makes it different and much better from the bland commercial fiction books that rule the market. I also found the quotes, especially the ones appearing at the beginning of each chapter, to be quite inspiring.
Stuti has portrayed the struggles of the protagonists well, and I could feel their frustration and anxiety as the journey progressed. The ending was the icing on the cake, with a revelation that totally took me by surprise. The characterization is good, but the characters could have been better fleshed out, especially with some more details of their family background and their past.
The language is excellent. Stuti certainly has a way with words, and I loved how she plays with nouns and verbs to create stylish, beautiful sentences.