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Write a story continuing - "He's very bad. He didn't bid me a goodbye.."

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Answered by Anonymous
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|| The Goodbye Kiss ||

"He's a very bad. He didn't bid me a goodbye." Said Manya in anger. She was almost set to leave for the preparatory school and here she was waiting for Rachit to come. She complained, "he don't even remember, that I'll meet him now after some years and he isn't here at the time when I need someone."

All this was complained by Manya to the maid of her house. Suddenly the door bell rang and she found Rachit on doors. He came close to her and gave a kiss on her forehead and asked "Is that okay princess? Sorry for being late." Tears started rolling down the cheeks of Rachit as he asked this and started remembering the day few years back.

Rachit as businessmen, couldn't afford to leave his meeting but he drove miles just to bid a goodbye to her daughter. Yes the girl was his daughter. Manya was the daughter of Rachit. The father loved her daughter more than anything.

Apart all this, the main reason why he left his meeting and came just to bid a goodbye was the instance which happened long time ago. The girl lost her mother at the time when she was born.

Shagun was the wife of Rachit, unfortunately a  cancer patient. She wasn't in a health to have that young child but she wanted to leave a piece of her heart who could be there to see his love grow and not to get defeated in the war of life.

The final day when Shagun was hospitalised, Rachit wasn't there. He was away due to some work and could find no way to reach her wife. All he could do was just cry and pray for the well being of the baby and her love and just wait for the car to reach.

But apart all these things, the luck wasn't with them. Doctors asked them to choose between one, either the baby or Shagun. Her family was ready to save Shagun and let baby die but it was all decision of Shagun who insisted to let that baby get born in the world and could possibly be a shoulder on which her father can cry when her mom couldn't support.

But Shagun had only complain, that Rachit wasn't there to bid her a goodbye kiss. She wanted him to be there, when she was leaving the world but god has some other plans. As soon as Rachit arrived, he heard some sound coming out of the ICU. One was the cry of that baby and other was the cry of Shagun's parents who were crying badly.

Possibly all Rachit could do was just to water that plant which was left after Shagun gone and find the peace with her.

This time Rachit was happy that he didn't miss that goodbye to her daughter and was present when her daughter needed him the most. All this made Rachit get a sigh of relief that he still have Shagun around her as Manya who could just have same love and affection which Rachit needed.


ammux: I really liked the story ☺
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samruddhi25: but u have written... he is a very bad.. isn't it wrong.... there is no need of article a
BrainlyQueen01: Awesome answer.. outstanding
Answered by LovelyBarshu
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The story is as follows dear :-

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Title - The passing away of him ❤

He's very bad . He didn't bid me a goodbye even . If he had done so , my love for him would be more than ever but in vain . He never told me that he would have to go one day and when he told sometimes indirectly , I used to take it sarcastically and forget about it thinking that he would never go off by my side .

I remember , "The first day we met ... it was a cheerful college picnic and I was in stuck in a trouble with no one there to help me . Then he came and kindly offered to help me . I was touched by his actions and felt like - it wasnt the first time I was meeting him . We shared some friendly words and then joined the other friends too . Since after that incident , we've been the bestest of friends and have been by each others' side for help ❤ "

Then , on the day when we went away.. , far from me ... I just felt heart rendered having nothing to say . I didn't have enough words to tell him what I felt for him . Before I could tell him my feelings , he left me in the middle of my life , never to return again . All just because of ....
He passed away due to severe illness and went to a faraway land and didn't bid me a bye . I just wanted to talk to him for once and wanted to convey him that , "Oh my bestest friend , I really love you . Should I tell you , I wont ever get a friend like you .." ...
And he just passed away .

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