Question

Hi all...plz check my formal letter....I put bts army....because I don’t want you guys to know my real name...

Thanks plz answer

Answer 1

Answer:

there is some mistakes in your formal letter like you did not use proper grammer and tenses

you should have to improve it rather than your examiner will cut your marks

hope u understand

Answer 2

Answer:

1. I think as you are writing this letter to the editor you should start the first paragraph like

Through the columns of your prestigious newspaper, I would like to draw the attention of concerned authorities towards the recurring street light problems in my area.

2. Moreover, try to add more logical difficulties faced by the people due to the street light problem in the second paragraph

For example (2nd paragraph): Recently, the residents of our area are facing problems with street lights. The lights don't function properly at night which increases the risk of accidents on road, gives easy access to criminals and makes it more unsafe. It causes difficulty to the residents who find it difficult to commute the place at night as well as passer-by's. Even after multiple complaints, authorities are yet to take action

3. You are writing this letter to the editor so that you can draw the attention of the authorities so the third paragraph should be

As your newspaper has a wide readership, I request that you publish this letter in the columns of your newspaper so that the concerned authorities wake from their slumber and take action.

Hope it helps :)