Question

Hi!
Could you please rate my short story?
Here it is:

Apocalypse

It had been 2 weeks since the zombie apocalypse had started.
All around the world people were turned into zombies and those who weren’t transformed are dead as a doorknob (or that’s what he thought).
This was all because of a disease spread around the world and nobody knew where it came from and how it started.
The only person left alive and human was Aaron Shleding.
A 25 year old man that is somehow immune to the disease.
He has been working on a cure ever since the transformations started and still hasn’t found anything that can turn the zombies back to how they were.
He tested the cures on zombie cats that were trapped in cages.
He can’t even sleep properly because the zombies come out at night and there isn’t any electricity so he has to stay away awake to defend himself.
He sleeps in a pattern.
On Monday he sleeps, on Tuesday he doesn’t sleep, on Wednesday he sleeps, and on Thursday he doesn’t sleep one wink.
This keeps going on and on over and over again.
Aaron goes outside and catches zombies (actual zombies not zombie cats) and locks them on a bed in his basement.
He makes sure that they are unconscious before he does this.
He tests his cure on them and if it doesn’t work that zombie get’s killed because that zombie might become even more dangerous.
One day he was in his lab once again making a cure.
But this time it was special.
This time it may actually work.
After all this trial and error he might have actually found a fix!
So he created a double of the liquid and gave the other one to the zombie cat.
And it worked!
The breathing slowed down, the eyes were going back to normal, and soon it stoped hissing and screeching and trying to break the glass.
Aaron couldn’t believe it.
He was shocked and happy at the same time.
The zombie in the cat had vanished into thin air!
He got another normal zombie by taking some of his blood and putting it on the ground the zombie was attracted to the blood and fell right into Aaron’s trap.
He make the zombie unconscious and gave it the medicine.
The breathing slowed down and the eyes turned back to normal.
The zombie into a human.
He took some of the zombies blood because the cure was inside the zombie blood.
He ran outside and tried to seen if there was anybody else left to spread cure to all zombies around the world.
To his surprise he found a secret zombie safe zone with humans inside.
There were guards there guarding the gates and making sure the people inside stayed safe.
Aaron gave the zombie blood to the guards and told them that the cure was inside.
Soon enough the zombies got turned back into humans and everything was back to normal.

Answer 1

Answer:

The story is awesome

At all, mostly I like adventure stories as well as movies. This story is how a man named Aaron Shleding saved the whole world by making a anti - dot of ZOMBIES.

ANYWAYS IF I WANT TO RATE THE STORY, SO I GAVE 5 ⭐ STAR TO IT.