Question

hi guyz . i have written a song. how is it


Wish I was too dead to cry
My self-affliction fades
Stones to throw at my creator
Masochists to which I cater
You don't need to bother
I don't need to be
I'll keep slipping farther
But once I hold on
I won't let go 'til it bleeds
Wish I was too dead to care
If indeed I cared at all
Never had a voice to protest
So you fed me shi.t to digest
I wish I had a reason
My flaws are open season
For this, I gave up trying
One good turn deserves my dying
You don't need to bother
I don't need to be
I'll keep slipping farther
But once I hold on
I won't let go 'til it bleeds
Wish I'd died instead of lived
A zombie hides my face
Shell forgotten with its memories
Diaries left with cryptic entries
And you don't need to bother
I don't need to be (I don't need to be)
I'll keep slipping farther
But once I hold on
I won't let go 'til it bleeds
You don't need to bother
I don't need to be (I don't need to be)
I'll keep slipping farther
But once I hold on (once I hold on)
I'll never live down my deceit​

Answer 1

Answer:

Vo ek bachpan ka zamana tha..

Jaha na dil ki khabar thi or na shaam ka thekana tha...

Pura din khel kud m nikal jata tha.. Or ye dil ek titli ka deewana tha...

Vo kaagzo ki kashti aaj bhi yaad aati hai..

Or vo baarish m ki gayi masti bhi...

Na samye ka phegana tha...

Vo humare baachpan ka zamana tha...Agar hui khuda se ardaas dobara kuch maange ki...

Toh m bachpan mangungi..

Vo rangeen dor ko dobara jeena chahungi...

Bachpan toh bhout haseen beeta tha humara...

Ke... bachpan toh bhout haseen beeta tha humara..

Lekin phir usse ek baar dobara dekhna chahungi...

this is written by me❤❤