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Then she waited a moment and listened to the quietness wonderful songs of the birds. Mary was delighted of the strangest and loveliest place with hazy tangle from tree to tree which made it all look so mysterious, roses which had so spread their branches that they were like little trees and the ground was covered with grass of a wintry brown and out of it grew clumps of bushes. Suddenly the place was invaded by a horrible and disgusting smell like a rotten egg that came from a tree. After that, a sound of tears made Mary move there, and she was very frightened of what that smell was going to be, but she was surprised to see a badly hurt puppy. She was disgusted by the smell of the poor puppy but decided to keep it. She did not understand how that little dog had arrived there, he was very badly looked after, and he seemed to be a bulldog.

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