Question

Hi there , I would want someone to punctuate the following poem . Your try would be appreciated!( Capitals , commas, etc)

I know your eyes aren't tired
they still want to overflow
I know your heart is made up of glass
that is already shattered into pieces

I know your mind is shut
but open to all negatives
I know your soul is forfeited
but you don’t want to scout for it

You say you sunk
but I see a boat rising
Go, go get on it!
It will show you the world

Other than the world under your blankets
Your mind says” no”, your hearts says “no”
But your soul once lost says “yes”
It says, “I know you are you are audacious”

Answer 1

I know your eyes aren't tired,

they still want to overflow.

I know your heart is made up of glass,

that is already shattered into pieces.

I know your mind is shut,

but open to all negatives.

I know your soul is forfeited,

but you don’t want to scout for it.

You say you sunk,

but I see a boat rising.

Go, go get on it!

It will show you the world.

Other than the world under your blankets,

Your mind says” no”, your hearts says “no”.

But your soul once lost says “yes”,

It says, “I know you are you are audacious”. Pls mark as brainliest.

Answer 2

Explanation:

I know your eyes aren't tired

they still want to overflow

I know your heart is made up of glass

that is already shattered into pieces

I know your mind is shut

but open to all negatives

I know your soul is forfeited

but you don’t want to scout for it

You say you sunk

but I see a boat rising

Go, go get on it!

It will show you the world

Other than the world under your blankets

Your mind says” no”, your hearts says “no”

But your soul once lost says “yes”

It says, “I know you are you are audacious”