English, asked by rakshivijayakumar123, 10 months ago

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Answered by prashant071731
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Answer:

In sahara the sand is turning red as the temperature is soaring high the burn is still borne by the camels.

Answered by orangesquirrel
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The errors have been detected and rewritten as follows:

In Sahara, the sand is turning red as the temperature is soaring high. The heat is even borne by the camels.

* In the first line, usage of a definite article is required. It is because it talks about the sand of a specific place.

Definite articles: the ( for something specific)

Indefinite articles: a, an

* In the second line, 'temperature' is singular and so a singular verb needs to be used( is soaring).

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