Question

Hii english paper i wrote the story in this way that me and my friend were waiting for the train to arrive to go for a trip.a man was sitting besides me and was gazing at me so i had some doubt and i told to my friend and we planned that i may go first and you come behind me .then when i was just entering into the train the man touched my pocket so my friend caught him and we asked him what he was doing? Then at last we came to know that he was trying to take the ticket which was falling from my pocket and i was wonderstuck and at last i apolozised and we departed....i gave the title a great misunderstanding....i gave moral that we should not blame anyone without any evidence.....only mistake i did is i wrote train instead of bus.....i used gud vocal and dialogues ....how much i may get...plz tell

Answer 1

if this is the only mistake and there is no grammatical error only half or at the most 1mark will be deducted

Answer 2

u should get 96.5 mark in the story because u have it of grammertical mistake