Question

Hopeless student life


Sailing on a sea of problems
I am a sailor
Who sees faint glimmer of hope
Which shant reach him

Hiking on a narrow trail of a hill
I am a trekker
Who sees faint hope on the top
Who is yet to be buried by snow

Floating on the dark land of space
I am an astronaut
Who sees faint hope in the stars
Who is yet to be lost

Moving along in life
I am a student
Who sees hope in formulas
Yet is about to fail on tests

Walking in the land of unknown
I am a wanderer
Who gets lost dreaming about A+
Yet is about to wander forever in life

I have to take part in a poem competitions so can someone tell me if this poem is worth taking part?​

Answer 1

Answer:

Sailing on a sea of problems

I am a sailor

Who sees faint glimmer of hope

Which shant reach him

Explanation:

this lines are good then others

i think this poem can't impress so you can take another one outside of this all

Answer 2

Answer:

good afternoon sis.....what happened, why are you sad..have you any problem.