Question

how can i improve my poetry


Har mafil me tera naam
fakaarta ho jor se
said tu aa jaye lot k

tu door hai or main
kreeb hoo
tere nhi mot k

Answer 1

Try to make some rhymings between the lines so that its more easier and excited to read

Answer 2

HELLO !!!!
HAPPY DUSSEHRA!!!
your poetry is already so cool....