Question

how can i improve my poetry ...??????

Socha tha badal jayenge
Waqat se onki tra


Liken waqat ne na muje bdla
na hi ohne badala


main aaj bi raato ko rota hoo
or vo aaj bi nye dost doond rha hai

Answer 1

have to put your emotions more and more .....it should be like that you are facing the problems....and I think most of the people like poetry having feelings,emotions,pain.The first line should be attractive like yours but you should improve.In addition to your one........☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
socha tha badal jayegi yeh duniya......
pr yeh na socha tha ki hume hi badal jayegi .☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
ab tras jayege aap sab humme phele jaisa pane k liye........wakt aana do hmara chehre aur lafz yaad hai humme☺️☺️☺️