Question

how can i improve my poetry



u r like redness of any lighting sun
i am as the grass of ground,

u r like a voice of peace
i am as failure sound,

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Answer 1

jb koi Khud ke feelings ko batane ke liye poetries likhta hai toh it doesn't matter ke how is it or how to improve it... the thing which matters is that aap jiske liye yeh poetry likhe ho bass Vo samjh jaye ke aap usse Kya batana chahte ho..... and I m sure ke Vo ladki zarur samjh gayi hogi ke how much you love her

Answer 2

your poetry is improved much u don't need to improve it again!!!!

i like your poetry it is very good!!!!

I really appreciate it. a clap for you!!! from me!!!!

but buddy here we ask q .

this is not a study regarding q!!!

I think u understand my point!!! thank u!!!