Question

how is my new written song . will u tell me my friendz

din wohi raatein wohi par main woh na raha
tanha in shaamon mein koi bhi apna na tha
chanda or taarein bhi puchein ki yeh kya hua
haan main wohi tum wohi sama ab yeh vo raha

morey piya tu na samjha
ki mein is duniya ka na tha aaa

khoya din khoyi raaton mein dhoodun mein kya
auron se shikwa par apnon ne bhi kya kiya
nahin is duniya mein koi jo apna laga
zamaane ki dhup ne mujhko ruswa kiya

morey piya tu na samjha
mein is duniya ka na thaa aa

rishtey sabhi
ban jaate hain
tootne ke liye ik lamha

morey morey piya
kaise kaise jiya
morey morey piya
kaise kaise jiya


morey piyaaaa

Answer 1

OMG! it's very nyc heart touching song
AWESOME ❤you are just great dude!!

Answer 2

From where did u get such brilliant talent? OMG