Question

how is my poetry and how i can i improve it

agar vo bewwaafi ka oskaa andaaj na hota,

to shayd ye shyar raj na hota,

or kuch hota na hota three year time b barbaad na hota​

Answer 1

Answer:

Your penmanship is quite good, but usually a larger vocabulary is of use in poetry, especially Hindi poetry. Using words from sanskrit or using harder words and lesser known words from Hindi would be a great way to improve upon this.

Answer 2

sorry coz I'm not in insta