How to edited/revised version may fifteen
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May 15 of thus year, I woke up with a happy heart. I thought a myself "when I reach 50 year old,60 or beyond ,I will look back to this day and smile." Then,I paid attention to my college graduation picture,farmed on a 4*6 decorative wood edging emblazoned with beautiful memories I reaches .For it ,and held it closely and uttered m,"10 years and I think you did a preety job!
I slowly put it back to the side table,off to my working station across my sliding window to fulfill in my daily routine :journal writing.
Then,I started:Dear journal,"In my 10 years as the member of the noblest profession in the universe,I have encountered several , influential ,inspiring and fabulous people. So,today,as a tribute,I am going to write about them, starting off with my top three favorites."
To begin with ,I did not like my first pick, she was someone would always,always disagree with my ideas and decisions.