Question

I badly wanted learn swimming so I hired A trainer who trained me for a month after training was complete I try to swim alone without anyone navigating me I jumped in the pool which was 3 feet deep OMMISSION

Answer 1

This question is an example of omission as in this case, if we split the overall passage into individual sentences, we would find that the whole passage has about one word omitted from each line. This has given it a shape of incomplete form and hence omission has been done here.

Upon correcting and inserting words, it would stand as:

-I badly wanted to learn swimming

-so I hired a trainer whop could train me

-for a month. after the swimming was complete

-I tied to swim alone, without

-anyone navigating me, I jumped up the

-pool which was three feet deep in one end and eleven at the other, Icy horror grabbed my heart.

NOTE: Each line is a continued portion of the previous context and hence is a continued word(and not any random new word), so the first letters have not been made capital in each line.

Answer 2

Answer:

Omission or editing is a grammar question that appears in the ‘Writing and Grammar section in the English Exam of IX and X Classes. Its weightage is 4 marks.  

The omitted words supplied are underlined.  

I badly wanted to learn swimming. So I hired a trainer who trained me for a month. After the training was completed I would try to swim alone without anyone navigating me. I jumped into the pool which was 3 feet deep.