Question

I have a question that there r 3 errors In the 3 sentences please help me with those a) it was merely when I began to learn that my boyhood freedom was an illusion.b)then I discovered as a young man that my freedom had already been taken from me, that I began to hunger for it.c)later as a old man in Johannesburg,.help me out of these

Answer 1

1.it was meagre,when i began to learn that my boyhood freedom was an illusion
2.Then i discovered as a young man that my freedom had already been taken from me,then i began to search for it
e.later as an old man in johannesburg

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