Question

i have composed a poem please check for mistakes

Happy Birthday

Birthday ones in a year
but wants day of a year
The day of cake and choco
The night of joy and kho-kho
From the dawn to dane
Till the school to lane
On the phone to pen
All bubbling just two little cans

The gift of father and the fun of laughter
The party at teacher and the love of brother
Fill all the wounds of miniature

Birthday is bestest day of all
Being in the nature you are carving the nature
Being in the school you are in full mood
Making fun of X-some good

Happy birthday to all birthday buddies

May this birthday will be best one of yours

Answer 1

Hello....

your poem is amazing and their is no mistake so don't worry........

I loved it..........

Answer 2

ohhhhhhhhh,u write it yourself ,good poem...
i will send to my friend s if it is their birthday~
;)