Question

I have to write a charactersketch on a person. Is it grammatically correct ​

Answer 1

Explanation:

put a comma after boy in the first line

first you were starting the sketch in present tense. but in the second line you continued In past tense, which is wrong.

so.

hari was a 15 y/o boy , who was an experienced and successful thief. he was a sharp observer and had good knowledge about human behaviour. He knew how to flatter people.

Answer 2

Here is your answer

Hari Singh is 15 years old boy. He has all experienceses and successful thief.He was a sharp obesever and he had good knowledge about human behavior and he also knew how to flatter people..

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