Question

i have written a short speech on humour and wisdom. I wanted to know is that is correct or no. Can you please check and tell me. I have ASL tomorrow. Please reply fast.

Speech

Humour and wisdom are very charming on their own but when you combine them it becomes a very exceptional aspect of one’s personality. Humour is something that makes us laugh or something that is funny and wisdom is intelligence. It usually helps us to impress others. I can’t say that I have both of them or that I have a personality to impress others but I can say for sure that I have a good sense of humour. It is not proven but it is a fact that we humans cannot spend even one day without any humorous thoughts crossing our minds. It is very natural to think something funny whenever the atmosphere is very serious. It helps us to keep our brains focused by refreshing it. It actually depends on our genes but can also be affected by the people who surround us. Wisdom depends on person to person. Some people have the capability but do not think before doing anything. My last year’s class, that is, 8-F had many people with low wisdom capacity. But they had a lot of humour in them so it almost made up others except the teachers. Personally, I give importance to this factor, wisdom, over all other personality factors.
I would like to conclude by saying that humour and wisdom, are very important for improving our personality but that is not all. Now I know this much much that a humerous thought might have crossed your minds during my speech or it might happen soon.

Answer 1

it is absolutely correct .only correct this third last line by removing one much .