Question

i have wrote a paragraph writing can you correct and improve it by replacing or adding good words

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Answer 1

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Explanation:

An invention that I would create would be a technological machine which can help entertain old aged people. Some features I'd add is a transportation machine which helps both old aged people and weak people transform to places without feeling tired. In addition, my machine would also have features like piano, puzzles and other things that wouldn't let the old people get bored. My machine would also let theim connect with their friends. Since most old people aren't 0active enough, my machine would be a way/reason to entertain them! Thank you