Question

I want to ask my teacher about preparation for my presentation.
please correct my sentence‍♀️‍♀️

Good evening.
I checked my topic is related to history.

according to a website, the
birth of baguette is related to various history.

The one of theory says, related to french revolution.


Rich people was used to eat wheat bread. but poor people could only eat bran bread.
the gap created a complaint and this affected this revolution.

so after the revolution, made a law about bread called " the
bread equality".

they banned to make bread for each status. all bakers can make only one bread.
the only one bread is baguette.

May I starting to prepare for presentation??

Answer 1

Answer:

Good evening.

I checked that my topic is related to history.

according to a website, the

birth of baguette is related to history.

The one of the theory says, about french revolution.

Rich people were used to eat wheat bread. but poor people could only eat bran bread.

the gap created a complaint and this affected this revolution.

so after the revolution, it made a law about bread called " the

bread equality".

then they banned to make bread for each status. all bakers can make only one bread.

the only one bread was baguette.

May I start preparing for presentation??

good luck for your presentation dear I read all the above lines very finely and edited it hope so that now there is no mistake...⏩⏩⏩

Answer 2

Answer:

1. I want to ask my teacher about, preparation for my presentation