Question

I want to know if this speech of mine is good for ASL?
Life without hobbies and interests is like food without the salt. It is a hobby which makes living interesting. They are activities which help us escape the daily grind of life and work and give us pleasure and peace of mind. It is a pastime, relaxation and leisure. In this way, while one is learning something, he is also making best use of his time.
There are many hobbies like painting, gardening, reading, sewing, crafts, embroidery, knitting, dancing, coin collecting, and singing. Etc.
They may also help us to discover talents and abilities which we are hidden within us .My favourite hobbies include drawing, photography and cooking.
I feel very calm and happy while drawing. It makes me feel that I’m in another world and that I’m being productive and not wasting time. we all should have hobbies and interests as they give us a lot of pleasure, relaxation, peace to our heart and as well as our mind.

Answer 1

Yes, your speech is good. Because it contains the main key words. ☺

Answer 2

Yes it is perfect. But I think it is a bit lengthy.